Last Goodbye

by lOsT sOuL   Sep 8, 2011


I sit here waiting
waiting for you to see
that time is running out
come on and save me

It's not your fault I'm crying
so don't you think that at all
don't feel guilty for something you didn't do
just hug me and don't let me fall

Your arms are so soft and cozy
The look in your eyes, I can't forget
I wish you didn't have to leave
but I know the date is set

I let the tears fall down my face
But you tell me not to cry
And that everything will be fine
I know it's all a lie

I know you can't stand it either
That we'll be so far apart
And sleep all alone each night
Yet I know we'll still be together in the heart

You give me one last kiss and hug
And wipe a single tear
Wish me luck and say goodbye
For its the last one I'll hear

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow... this is so sad. You had me captivated from the start, I'd just recommend you to chose a different title because this one tells too much. This poem sets a nice scenery that the reader is able to imagine and I like the emotions because they're so heartfelt and everybody can relate to them.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    I love your poem, very well written 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow :)
    I Love this poem.
    You can picture everything so perfectly in your mind & feel the pain thats pouring through as tears run down your face.
    Amazing:)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    It's not your fault I'm crying
    so don't you think that at all
    don't feel guilty for something you didn't do
    just hug me and don't let me fall

    my favorite :)

  • 12 years ago

    by lovrgirl96

    All of it is really touching. Goodjob :)

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