The End

by MissIce   Sep 9, 2011


The end

I sit here alone, all by my self.
To write my feelings to you.
The life we had.
The life we should have had.
You were always there for me
I was always there for you
You loved me dearly, nearly as much as I loved you.

You taught me how to love.
I taught you how to care
You told me I could trust you
Not to worry ever again

For you it was just a game,
For me it was an end
I could never look at you the same.
Ever again.

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  • 14 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow this is amazing! I love the use of emotion that you use here. There is a nice flow, and a great word choice. Your descriptions and lines were very basic, and didn't really fit the piece as well as they could have. The beginning was cool, the ending was pretty nice; so good job there. Overall I would have to give this a 4/5, which I did. Though welcome to the site, and in time I'm sure you will be so much better then you ever thought you could be.

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