I miss him

This piece has emotion, and description, and longing for love. Though this being said I see many places that you have penned to perfection, and a few rough edges that could very easily be polished. Your beginning was nice, and it really did lead up to a nice piece, but your end was lacking something to really bring it to a nice close. It was like reading a fantastic book, that the author never finished. The word choice was okay, but I believe it could have been stronger. There was a little bit of detail that was written and inserted very nicely. There was a bit of a flow, but it is very rough in some places. Otherwise, I think this poem is great. Keep it up! :)