True pain

by Kelwin lost in thought   Sep 13, 2011


True pain is haveing your heart broken.
Being told you are nothing that noone cares.
Being all alone afraid to love and love to hate.
That your a mistake. Unable to do anything right.
What is true pain you ask. The answer is life. Nothing worth reambering or having doesn't come without it's pain. That's what true pain is

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  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I can totally relate to this... yea i know where you are coming from.. to me, being told your worthless by my mom was the worst thing ever..

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Amen to this.
    Short & but right to the point.
    Heartbreak is the worst pain ever.
    Good Job
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rowena Linley

    This is good! It tells how you feel! But there is a few spelling mistakes! But all in all a very good poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    True pain is haveing your heart broken.
    Being told you are nothing that noone cares.
    Being all alone afraid to love and love to hate.
    That your a mistake. Unable to do anything right.
    -This is my favorite :)

    True pain is haveing your heart broken.
    Being told you are nothing that noone cares.
    Being all alone afraid to love and love to hate
    - now this I relate too

    I loved this everything is great and I enjoyed reading this poem :) 5/5

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