Yearning Desires

Now i call this a excellent work..:) it's so heart touching.. anyone can relate with these words and feelings.... those what we see with our eyes are just an illusion.... what we feel in our heart are the truth.... :):) Dreams will come true one day.... have to wait for that...:) yap everyone has a soulmate..which are meant to be together ..meant to me made for eachother..who will understand you ..who will love you more then anything else...... and at that time u will say that My day has come... :) beleive in faith...:) great work to insire..:) 5/5

I adored this. Stupid movies making us believe love can beat anything. Head up, you will find someone. No-ones perfect like fairytales make us believe but that doesn't mean there aren't good people out there. Trust me on this one, I know what its like to give up on love and then be hit in the friggen ass by cupids arrow when I don't expect it. Everything will be good in the end; if its not good, it's not the end <3 5/5

Aw girl.
Beautiful poem, just wanting a true pure love.

Can I really believe that?
In my heart I feel the desire
and wish it to be true.
Will I ever find a guy...
wanting me as much as I want him.
But in the end,
do fairy tales exist?
-We never do, nothings that perfect,but the right guy won't ever hurt us.
I loved every piece of this poem.Flowed good & you could mentally see it.
:)
Love it
5/5

They do to some extent. I really liked this poem. It was a good read read, easy to understand and read. It flowed good from beginning to end and it was a nice length.

gave it a 5/5