Night Stalker

by Brittany C   Oct 1, 2011


In the shadows you stood
Watching; never touching
Wanting but never taking
As the hunger rips through you.

You want it to be right
So you wait; in darkness
For the right moment in time.
Your lust for him grows.

Night turns to day
You lay in wait
as night darkens the sky
you take up hiding.

There he is; you jump in
Taking him, drinking in.
Bring him home
making him yours.

Turning him into what you are
making him a monster; just like you.
Making him yours for eternity
For vampires can live forever.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Amazing dark write!
    couldnt have done better myself!

    i hope to see more soon ^_^

    a pleasure to read, i wanted it to be longer

    5/5 from me
    wouldnt change a thing

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nice dark write. Done with imagination and creativity. It was a joy to read.

  • 14 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is really goood and interesting kinda but awesome and great read i loved it :) :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    OMG!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!

    Look, you may get shocked with what I'll say... This is definitely amazing (though there are some 'tiny lines/verses' that seemed off) with its flow, and those pauses that make my hormnone levels shoot to the sky :p lol..

    okay, this is definitely an inspiring write. DARK and SUSPENSEFUL.
    The first two stanzas are perfect.

    The 3rd and 4th need some changes in structure. There is some repitition.. you can manage to tie it up.

    But, I love this poem with its raw pace and charm ...

    Nominated the next week. please pm me as a reminder. yes, plz :)

    FIVE

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