Why

by Chris   Oct 6, 2011


Why were you so depressed,
Why didn't you talk to your parents.
and tell them how you felt,
You don't desereve to die.
You have a whole life to live,
I desereve to die.
I have a little life left to live,
Why did you do it.
Was it because i smoked,
Was it because i wasn't there for you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by shayla

    This poem is so powerful

    i love this poem :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Chris

    Yea i did experience this.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I think that the emotions in this poem are really powerful and they show much more than your words do. The speaker seems frustrated, sad, guilty and filled with sorrow. The fact that you directed this poem at the person you're refering to makes it really personal and underline the speakers emotional situation.

    I do hope that this is "only" a poem afterall and that you didn't actually experience this. If you did I'm really sorry and though I do not know what happened I think it's not your fault.

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