Who Says?
by Jess Oct 9, 2011
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Dreams, |
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Latest Comments
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12 years ago
This poem is excellent! i haven't read a poem like this in along time, you have a way with words! 5/5 ^.^
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12 years ago
Yet again you have a good here :D
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12 years agoby Tara Kay
The title was simple and effective, though I question if it was too obvious, too simple?
A very true and poignant piece.
I'd suggest if I may that...
You re-arrange the lines
so it reads
"Who says
dreams
will run dry?"
etc etc
A great piece overall -
12 years ago
by BlueJay
I really like this piece. It is creative and simple. I especially like the end, because a lot of people would fight that, would say that the majority of the world says that, but in truth no one of importance does. The flow is extraordinary. Correction to my first statement, I LOVE this piece. Amazing job
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12 years ago
Who says?
Faith
is a broken word
liked it....
