Nature can be worst [Tanka]

by Boy Oct 16, 2011 category : Nature, environment / nature

Curling waves dancing
The Ship moves dangerously
Heavy rain dark storm
Making worst all positions
Horrible face of nature

syllables 5 7 5 7 7

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12 years ago
by Amreen

Lovely... I liked the usage of words here... Tankas, haikus are very creative as u are to convey the deepest of emotions in few lines.... Great attempt:)
Keep writing:)
13 years ago
by Steven Beesley

Well done.
13 years ago
by Decayed

I LOVE TANKAS!! :D

I haven't wrote anyone in my life until Abby's contest.

And this one is great.

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