Eyes [Acrostic]

by Boy   Oct 26, 2011


Every time I trap in matchless attraction
Your way of looking makes me glad too
Enhancing my inner soul passion ability
separating and disconnecting me from People

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ashdown

    Beautiful. The eyes are the gateway to the soul and you really capture that with this poem.
    I also feel as if it's unfinished, the way you worded the ending made me want more. What about making it a double acrostic? Just a thought.
    It's beautiful the way it is though and very sweet.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A simple title, and word to create the acrostic,
    I liked it, although i do feel you could have gone somewhere further with this, maybe is just me, but it didnt feel finished, I wanted more I suppose

    love,
    Tara

  • 13 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Now I know the meanig of Acrostic hehe, and Im gonna try writing an Acrostic poem:)
    This poems is well written, I love it a 5/5:)

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