What?

by Something Diabolical   Nov 2, 2011


Spirals of colour expand in my mind
Dreaming an endless dream
I am so glad that I am alive
There are so many things I've not seen

So many experiences yet to unfold
Trying to savour them all
So many feelings I get to hold
Finding the big and the small

What will I be? What will I do?

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A clever little piece and really well written.
    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    What? I like the title, it caught my attention and the questions at the end as well. I'm glad I still live because I have a long way to go and your poem only reassured that to me.

    Well written and I like the flow. It sounds smooth.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    Though the title is simple, it made me curious because I was wondering what you might be refering to or asking so I decided to read your poem. I think that the rhymes were good and even if this poem is short, the message and meaning behind this is quite powerful. The questions at the end are thought-provoking.

    Well written poem.

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