by Truelove Nov 11, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
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I can't do nothing </3 |
by Truelove
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Thanksss ;* |
by Rihanna
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Awwww i love this poem its really good you did a great job... |
by Boy
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Its good. but try to give it stanza shape poem.. ignore the big lines... break the lines and give them the stanza shape. so it would better look a poem..... :) |
by Marvellous
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'What repels, is not meant to be' Tame the Past, and name your Future' and you can be sure to be fine in the end.. Well done! |
by Paul Gondwe
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The idea, the content of this piece is good but its not reaching its full potential..witi some punctuatios and editimg here and there, i know this piece will even b bette...i giv it a 4, bt i knnw with the necessary collections, its a straight 5. |