Winter Waters (Haiku)

Wow! I like this! Your choice of words were perfectly fit for this haiku. I love how you compared the salty water to a cappuccino. It was a delight to read.

Well done!

I love love loved this creative and vivid and delightful and wonderful
great poem 5/5

------Winter waters ------
Salt, bound by the sand -
foamy waters imitate
a cappuccino

Short, really short yet well written.
Winter waters like the ones in the pole. Cold cold and too salty. Foamy waters imitate a cappuccino. Lol I like the contrast cold and hot. Who would have imagine to compare a cappuccino with something cold.. Just clever! And the best of all is that we can form so many pictures in our brains.

OMG! This is definitely an amazing piece. I like the playful picture here..

It's the first time I read a totally perfect and most of all CLEVER haiku. I think you penned it! Really penned it.

Cappuccino? lol. That was the last thing I would have thought of. Brilliant.. way to go:)

Excellent Haiku. You brought the image to life, with words short and accurate.