Faltered Breaths

by Lioness   Jan 9, 2020


You force whispered breaths against my name, and at that point I knew your love for me had faltered, leaving my soul as empty as your promised words.

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  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I did a double take when I saw a new piece by you! Missed you and your poetry. This is heart-wrenching, even in such few lines. Feeling love and affection, knowing it is forced, nothing can shield you from that sadness.

    Sending all the love <3

    • 1 year ago

      by Lioness

      Awww Thanks so much!!! Yeah it's amazing to be back and can't wait to write and read more!

  • 1 year ago

    by hiraeth

    Glad to see you posting again, as heartbreaking as this poem is.

    • 1 year ago

      by Lioness

      Awww thank you that means a lot. Yeah! Great to be back!

  • 1 year ago

    by Star

    A short heartbreaking poem. I really like the title, it sets the mood for the poem really well :)
    It is so good to see an old member posting again!!!

    • 1 year ago

      by Lioness

      Awww actually really excited to post again lol I've been writing stories in the meantime lol Love this site. Thank you so much.

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