You Made Me Feel.....

Been through that myself. it hurts but i promise give it time and things will get better :)

Very good for your first poem ...

few little tips for later ...

try and get more deeper emotions
To grab the reader by the heart

other then tht its a really good start keep writing

Awwwww this is sooo sad darling

But it's still amazing how you wrote it babe

5/5 x

Well done. You present your thoughts well in your work. It is good to have poetry to release the feelings that dwell, grow, and sometimes must be released onto the sheet. I do hope you continue to write.

Nice , keep Going