Heavenly Water

by Michael D Nalley   Nov 25, 2011


Water risen high
Drawn by the rays of the sun
Returns to our earth
To bless all creatures below
Before rising up again

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I like it

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Love itttt!!! In such few words, you painted a beautiful picture. Amazing :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Hello Michael
    This nature poem is awesome :) I read it slowly and its almost a tanka although you have not listed it as such...bad me I started counting syllables and there it is ...last line 8 syllables..

    Before rising above again

    easy fix really with perhaps...

    Then rising above again.

    Take care friend
    Lostlove

  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    That's a great picture of the water cycle on earth. I love it.

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