She was only fourteen.

by Bridget   Jun 24, 2004


Why did you take my daughter?
How twisted is your mind?
She was only fourteen.
She was so young and kind.

She did you no harm.
She wasn't doing wrong.
She was on her way to school.
The walk isn't that long.

But you cornered her in that alley.
She was so scared, was crying.
So, you decided to stab her.
Then you left my baby dying!

You didn't even rob her.
I just don't understand why.
You just did it for no reason.
And left a girl to die.

( I'm not sure about this poem, but I have posted it anyway. )

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bridget

    Thank you for your comments. Your right, it is true that this goes on, and the world will never be one good place. But im glad you all like the poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Hey Bridget.
    That was a very nice poem. You did such a fine job in writing that piece. I liked the flow as well as the wording. This piece was very heartfelt and full of emotion. Thank you for sharing such a fine piece of poetry. Take care always
    Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicole Kinder

    this was a good poem, it had alot of emotion through it. its a shame that things like that actually go on, im im glad you adressed it. keep up the good work!

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