With You!

by Marii   Nov 29, 2011


You said you loved me
you said you cared
the feeling you said you felt
were never there
you told me love last forever
i guess you lied cause were not together
there was a point when i knew
everything you said wasnt true
even doe i knew that
all i wanted to do is be with you!

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  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    You said you loved me
    you said you cared
    the feelings you said you felt
    were never there
    you told me; "love lasts forever"
    I guess you lied, because were not together
    there was a point when I knew
    everything you said wasn't true
    even though I knew that
    all I wanted to do is be with you!

    again great piece, full of emotion and like before about is an edited version with correct grammar. hope this helps as well