I Still Love You!

by Marii   Nov 29, 2011


You cheated you lied
after all i always cried
you never really notices
that i cried my self to sleep
i was just that one girl
you didnt want to keep
you cheated on me and i dont care
cause all i want to do is be there
i really dont know what to do
because im deep in love with you
even doe you went away
in my heart you will always stay

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  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    You cheated, you lied
    after all, I always cried
    you never really notices
    that I cried my self to sleep
    I was just that one girl
    you didn't want to keep
    you cheated on me, and I don't care
    because all I want to do is be there
    I really don't know what to do
    because I'm deeply in love with you
    even though you went away
    in my heart you will always stay

    good poem, very emotional. I noticed some errors. above is an edited version with correct grammar. hope that helps

    -193