Lyrical Existence

What a beautiful, lovely, romantic poem that you have both written here.

Each stanza shows so much love and the use of the words here are wonderful.

I love how you used the words "Fairy Dust" as if it were Innocent Fairy herself!

I felt a sense of warmth when reading this poem. It's like a poem about first love and the feelings you get when you fall in love for the first time.

With open arms I embrace you .
Smiling as my heart takes wings.
I savor the nectar of your kiss
yearning for more, absorbing your warmth
A kaleidoscopic of colors twirl round me
as fairy dust glistens on my skin.
Sweet eternity is my wish with you.
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I love this stanza - my fav one of the poem. I love the words kaleidoscopic colours - mirrored love!

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Well done to the both of you!

Realy a beautiful poem..one of ur best..ful points..

I love what the two of you have done, it's tender and delicate, mixed with galactic wonder. Beautiful

Wow! This poem is beautiful.... I was mystified! The title was lovely and caught my eye... and the pictures you painted in this poem was amazing, I envisioned the imagery and it was fantastic. I didn't even realize it was a collaboration until the end, and this is a realllly GREAT collaboration. It flowed really well and I couldn't tell at all. I really love the metaphors you've written... like this part:

"I savor the nectar of your kiss
yearning for more, absorbing your warmth
A kaleidoscopic of colors twirl round me
as fairy dust glistens on my skin."

"Our hearts shall dance in the milky way
and the galaxies in space."

All I can say is BEAUTIFUL!!! Well done you two!!! =D

This was filled with enthusiasm and magic. To have that kind of love can make the difference in someone's entire existance. The icing on the cake:)

Well done, you two:)

5/5 Ingrid