by Lofallenve Dec 22, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
new love
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I'm like a planet on a corkscrew gravitational pull, |
by L
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Look at you, this is something similar to what I ve been wanting to write but my words just couldn't come thus I haven't finish it. And you did an execellent job with this piece. I'm really surprised. |
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The imagery is astronomical in this intense love poem. I am impressed Your flow is in order and pulling me in. |
by Xionide
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Holy mother of god! I wasn't expecting this, not one bit. From the moment go this poem entrances ita reader to wilfully read on to see what'll happen next. |