Am sorry

by LonelySEeker   Dec 22, 2011


Filled with sorrow, filled with pain knowing that am to blame for leaving your heart out in the rain.
Am sorry for breaking all the promises

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  • 11 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    I started out very hopeful but then I got a little disappointed at the end.
    I feel like it would have been a much stronger piece if you left out the last line "Am sorry for breaking all the promises" - The flow has been cut because if this line.

  • 11 years ago

    by LonelySEeker

    Its new style:p
    N by d way dis is n0t an exam or any kind of test 2 use pROper gramMEr..
    UndErStandin is ol dat readErs neEd...n h0pe u did undrSTand dat

  • 11 years ago

    by LonelySEeker

    Its new style:p
    N by d way dis is n0t an exam or any kind of test 2 use pROper gramMEr..
    UndErStandin is ol dat readErs neEd...n h0pe u did undrSTand dat

  • 11 years ago

    by Emily Jamie

    It's "I am sorry" or "I'm sorry" not just "am sorry". Other than that, this belongs in quotes not poems and with your quotes; use correct grammar. (This included capitalization. Correct. iNcoRreCt.)

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Good poem :)

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