Haikus tickle at the very core of my feelings. so short, yet they know how to attract you. And this, I love it.. I love the contradiction between temperatures, without, and within. Great job.

Wow I truely like it, its one of the best Haikus I've ever read:) 5/5

Loved it Liz. Many people are never warm.

This a really good Haiku. I liked how you were to the point. Haiku's can be hard to write because you want to connect with the reader but you only have a few lines in which to do so. In my opinion you did connect with the reader as you managed to be to the point and get down to the core of things.

Excellent

5/5

Such a cool little piece! Fabulous wording, and a message that oh so many can relate to. Great work!

My jaw just drop.
I love reading haikus and this one was not the exception.

I like the structural concept in a haiku, how they intice the reader in so few lines.

I think the contradictory worked well,
and thought this was a very good haiku,
a task in itself to get a meaning across.

Ah wonderful Haiku"s
You did a great job with this one. Very original and interesting. Keep it up love your work

Knew someone like this, this is priceless

Amazing and greatly done I loved it 5/5

Amazing and directly straight forward.

Your heart; cold as ice
^^
A metaphorical phrase that is often said to someone who has lost his sense of emotions, but you used it in your opening to convey a point.

Your skin is hot like the sun
^^
Cold from the inside, hot from the outside. What an image to draw on the reads minds. You start drawing an image, but then BOOM your last line comes.

Still; you're never warm
^^
What a contradictory thought, I loved it.
Now I wonder why? This line made me think a lot, I love it when poems challenge my mind to think deep about them.

Perfection in one piece Liz.

Oh I love, how you started this, your heart--cold as ice, what a beginning, striking oh girl!

your skin, is hot like the sun... okay I do looovee this line, but If I were you, I'd play with the placement of the words to be less direct, like not to give the message from the begining of the line, but leave it till the end..

this way:

hot like the sun, is your skin

it works both ways, but I love surprises haha..
man, you have such a mind; loved how the character is not warm dspite of the temp of the body! you know sometimes when we refer to the temp of the sun, we may also take it as "burning"

someone who has a heart, cold as ice, emotionless..with a burning attitude ! yet not with human feelings nor sympathy. Loves your work a lot.

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Wow!! Amazing haiku!!! I love it!!!!

I love how you started it with something so shocking, 'your heart as cold as ice' .. it immediately strikes me as the reader.

And I like the oxymoron between hot and cold, how this person's skin is as hot as the sun... and how they are still not warm...

One of the best haikus I've ever read! Great job!