Did you become yourself?

by Karla   Dec 30, 2011


"Did you become yourself?" I asked him
as he followed the moon with silken eyes.
The night was cold:
he was wearing his worn-out brown leather jacket
(I loved when he thrust his hands into his pockets
and waited for me on the porch, whistling Distractions.
I guess I liked to be late just to listen to him.)

He stopped walking, looked at me,
beyond me, through me and calmly replied:
"I have brought my dreams to the world,
I began to germinate at birth
and right now, I am a geranium.
A geranium in love with an exotic jasmine."
We laughed together.
(It was good to laugh with him.
Don't think I can laugh now as I used to)

I only got to know the real answer
to my question when he was already a seed again.

Last week I could finally plant some jasmines in my yard.
But I can't see geraniums yet.
They still germinate in me.

Karla Bardanza
http://asmoonsewsthesatinstars.blogspot.com

Distractions
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7A6E0jZRvE&feature=BFa&list=FLMz2jMUEux7hStWvia4oJLg&lf=mh_lolz

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  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    K..loved this one

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashmore

    Well written! I like the question "Did you become yourself?" Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I've always said your poems are magic, you metaphors breathtaking. This poem lifted the reader into the arms of romance , delicate and fragile. I'm always in awe of your work

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla,

    Very very vivid and a well descriptive poem. I felt like I was reading a novel and deep in the pages, holding onto every word.

    Geranium - what a beautiful flower! To say that the geranium in love with an exotic Jasmine. For me reads like two people who are different from each other who are in love. Like Romeo & Juliet.

    Nicely done!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    "and right now, I am a geranium.
    A geranium in love with an exotic jasmine."
    We laughed together."

    ^^^ these lines made me smile.. I loved this poem greatly... what a precious piece ~