Awesome write Randy..loved the perfect flow and rhyming and also the beautiful message you have captured in this poem. Its always a joy to see a new one from you. keep penning! Your friend
lostlove

"I so just want to let her know,
she was ALWAYS meant for me.
How we're destine to shine together

...for all eternity. "

This is my favorite part!!

I like the changed in the word infinity to eternity since eternity fits better with the flow.

I enjoy reading poems with rhymes but that also keep a nice flow so excellent job with this piece. One can truly feel the excitement and happiness that the author is feeling. :)

This is astronomically romantic ,we do indeed think alike and I am thrilled you found the muse to write this masterpiece

And I have no doubt we'll flourish,
as our energies unite.
For the radiance that is her love,
could pierce the darkest night.

My fav stanza. I have never seen love described with such amazing words before. The imagery you have put in this poem are amazing. Your use of heavenly bodies to describe your love is good and brilliant. And the ending was great.
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When I first read the title (Wavelength) I was like noooo Physics is following me every where.

But when I completed reading, I totally agree with everyone its really romantic and lovely:) great work 5/5:)

Epic is all that needs said

As somewhat of a nerd, I really like all the techie metaphors, trough and crests. It reminds me of an old ocilliscope :D This poem really works and flows flawlessly. Very touching and heartfelt

"Destine for each other,"

should be "destined" ?

Fourth stanza in is definitely my favorite so far as I'm reading. I love the rhyme here with one and unison, not something I've read before, which is nice as a lot of rhyming poetry feels forced for me.

I think the part about Pisces and Scorpio was cute, it added a definite 'aw' factor here. The rest of the poem was definitely lovely but I feel like because I don't know you or your relationship better, it's hard for me to really understand and connect with it. Again with great imagery, you have a gift for that :)

You know what, I am head to toe green with envy. Because you evidently have something that so very few people on this earth can find. The feeling of connecting with someone on such a level as can not be reached by anyone else other than you and your love. Hold onto this feeling, whoever inspired this, do not let them go.

Geez, I'm overcome. Well done you and congratulations on finding purpose and meaning in your life. What are we here for if not to love.

5/5

So many good stanzas in this write. They brought an elation to the idea of realized love. Very good write.

This was awesome. one big metaphor. amazing. i try to do this kinda stuff and fail all the time. you are an inspired writer to say the least. great job and keep up the awesome work!

I was hooked by the first Stanza of this poem! amazing write!

From the first stanza the theme was set, the reader was drawn in, it never faltered or changed but constant and excellent

Oh my gosh. This is amazing. You explain your love as such a beautiful thing, reminds me of my own. Your way with words leaves me speechless, really.

"So destined for each other,
Here on earth, and in the stars.
Both places thus reflecting,
the connection that is ours."

Your flow of words is perfect, just goes so, so well. Another favorite. 5/5