Very creative, I really liked this. 5/5

Meme.. that felt so smooth... like a silky blanket!!

Fine,
Just let me slip
away from the
corners of your
heart.

^ I love the word 'Fine' in the beginning.. as if you're with him leaving, and at the same time, you won't things to be fixed again.

You keep pulling
me a little bit
further from
your heartbeats.

^ A beautiful, yet simple way of saying he's no more into you, and the 'heartbeats' which reflect 'beating for love' stresses on that fact.

I'm falling,
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falling,
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still falling.

^ It felt like a movie or something :) I love the feeling...

When will you
man up and
catch me?

^ Powerful! It's like this stanza is under 'falling'.. meaning, he should be down there, waiting to catch you. love the shape:)

Don't leave my
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tangled by a thread.

^ There's a play on words here... randomness in letters? the love?

Pull me up closer;
or simply cut the
string.

^ I was expecting something not of flawlessness in the end... just 'pull me up closer' for example.
But NO, you had to surprise me!
I love CUT THE STRING!! It's original, and I haven't expected that.
Amazingly done.

Oooh Abed, I meant to write it this way so that the word LOVE looks like its tangling on a thread when you look at it :)

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I love the uniqueness and flow of this piece....it is strong and conveys just what you are feeling and need, a decision to be made because you are falling in this love, tangled by so much.

A creative piece! The ending gave such power, draw me nearer or cut me off and I'll be gone..

Great work.

I loved the creativness, how you wrote

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Real smooth
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And unique
Plus I loved the ending too :)
Loved it all Meme

Awww Meme!!
Im totally impressed now more!!
I got it, thanks;)

I like the title. It made me curious as to what exactly was tangled, of course I kept reading.

I love poems where the use of the words are made to look what they are trying to say. I've seen a number of poems that have done this and I think it really emphasises what you're trying to say because we can see it visually.

I love how you have used "Hanging by a string" in your poem by saying cut the string.

No one wants to be in that sort of position and felt "in the air"

Well written poem

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Very nicely written indeed. The heart of the matter was addressed and I liked the way it came out. Great job.

Wow! I'm speechless... this poem is amazing! I love the structure and the creativity behind it! The title was also perfect for it... you're tangled in this love mess and don't know what to do!

I love the 'Love' tangled part... it had so much meaning... I also like the falling part... and the way you structured your words and the periods so even the reader can feel the idea of falling...

"Pull me up closer;
or simply cut the
string. "

>> the ending was simple and straightforward... I like that! I don't think it's fair for someone to drag someone along, when they're not sure if they want them etc.. it's either they fully commit or let go, because it's just unfair.

Great job with this poem! Love it!!!

That's definitely worth a nomination, I love the feeling, i love the emotions and oh how i love the way I can relate to this, like most of everyone else, i guess!

I Love the way you ended this, great wording, very creative!

Men are weird tho, i dont know why they love to us "tangled" lol :) it's very hard to be stuck and not being able to know whether you leave..or stay. oh man you knew id like this, and you were right. well done!

Wow!!! damn creative attempt must say... awesome it is, a definite 5/5 :)

Such simple outstanding portray of rocky r/ships. Straight to the point. This is a tangling poem with the ball in your hands. Shoot to the net thus scoring or retrieve and bail out of the match. I like the simplicity of your craft, gives an edge of daring bravery to the subject. Keep rolling the ink on paper..., Jazakallahu Khairan. Blessings shweety... ;-).