I have written countless poems
so many for and about you
so it could seem that I love you
but hidden from my eyes
as perhaps I can't figure out why
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I think the first stanza is the best out of this poem

Heartbreaking babe. You love this person so much but you don't know why. Is it because he does not deserve your love???

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Idk,,maybe,,good question and thanxs lioness :)

I can't grasp you
you were always like
a passing dream

Like a ghost holding me,
feeling the comforting embrace..

Jus as beautiful and powerful like ur othr poems..fp

You have expressed love is a beautifully way. Your feeling about this guy in this piece are visible. Great job.

A beautiful poem of expressing your feeling to the one you love. you did an excellant job, it rhymed great and flowed so perfectly. I'd say my favorite lines were:

I can't grasp you
you were always like
a passing dream

love those lines! the deepest part of the poem in my opinion. in other words these words really struck my heart and stuck out to me. amazing job hun 5/5

Nice i love it

I love this poem, outstanding job, 100/100