Paul this is really sweet. There is something about having a friendship and then starting a romance with it. I think it makes it more special.

I really hope that you two end up together.

The only thing I could fault with this was very very minor but I beleive denie should be deny

Other than that. Well done. Short but meaningful poem.

x

This is a very beautiful friendship poem

Wow this is an awesome piece. Its short sweet and simple. You make a point easily and quickly, great piece. 5/5

This is a lovely poem, I also hope That your bond with your friend becomes stronger.

Aw this is definiley a lovely poem and I too hope that your bond with your friend becomes stronger. Nice poem :)

Great poem,,I loved it and wonderfully written and the reader can see an feel this poem that u write fantastically :)

Good friendships are hard to find then there are some that turns out to be something special. I guess you have found that..a heart warming read :)

Bst of Luck !

Short, sweet, simple, yet intriguing beautiful. i love it.

This poem was like a breath of fresh air. It was short, simple yet romantic.

I love the ending, it made it special and was perfect... I also love how this friendship build into love, that is definitely a great kind of relationship!

Great job!

Paul-

what a touching piece you have written... In my own personal thoughts... it is a beautiful thing when friendship grows into something more... that is how it should be~

the ending was so pretty.... and I adored this little gem :-)

Friendship is such a sweet responsibility and good foundation for love.............enjoyed the write

This iss sooooooooooo sweet paul u should go for if u like her and she like u go for it

I have read many poems like this but none of them had such sweet ending.

Just with one last line, you took this one to another level.

maybe one day,
we will both smile and say
'that is how it started'

This piece is short, simple and yet so deep. Loved it all the way.

all the best and take care

Short, but the meaning behind the words is huge. I love this :) you ended it perfectly :) :)

I still wish,
The love I have for my bestfriend,
Was equal between us.
I, one day, hope this will be about us.
5/5

Beautiful lines~

my heart yearns for something more
i was afraid to love
but now i open up to say
i feel the same way too
maybe one day,
we will both smile and say
'that is how it started'

Great work! 5/5!

This was for me :(