Immortal in my poems

by Pain   Jan 10, 2012


Thank you everyone
my love is killed
And now you Drink wine on her Grave
and my poem killed with her
dont leave me in this world alone
even The Sun After you
Does not light up on the coast
i never saw Woman like you
embodies all the glories of the ages
Do you know my love
she was the most important poem in books of poetry
I will say in the investigation
I know the names And things And prisoners
I say I know my wife's killer swordsman
And the faces of all the informants
And that there is no difference
Between politics and prostitution
Is the killing of women hobby now in our time
Or are we in origin professionals crime
those who were involved in the murder all they want to To kill my peoms
Rest in pace my love
Poetry Ater you is impossible
And femininity impossible
generations of lovers will ask about you
and Read about you
you will be immortal in my poems rest in pace

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  • 12 years ago

    by Pain

    Thx for ue words i hpe u like it

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhhhhh I have to say this poem was just breathtaking.... and powerful doesn't give this poem enough justice... I really did feel a huge charge of emotion while reading this..... wow, wow, wow....

    on a technical note:
    The last word... did you mean to say peace?
    I am notorious for typos and I do love it when fellow poets bring it to my attention....

    I look forward to reading more of your poetic gems in the future...
    take care~

  • 12 years ago

    by Pain

    Thx for ur comment and im working on new one

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My gosh this piece is fantastic! The descriptions are terrific and the word choice is stunning. This piece is just excellent! Ill leave a real comment soon, I promise, but for now just know that this piece captured me. I was pulled in with the title and the piece itself is so interesting. Dont ever ever stop writing cause this is far too good.