Beautiful it was worth the wait :)

This makes for a heart-felt piece, which would have even sustained more poetic flow, if not for its partially narrative enigma. You certainly can also do exploits here, by just trimming up the repititive use of *She*.. I guess with this, I'm free to leave you a sound 5! Beautifully done! Proceed!!

WOW..I had shivers through my bodie when I read it..it was so sad I felt like crying..

Ahhh of course it's amazing lol :)

1000/1000

Truly amazing Angel, i loved it :) stay strong, ull pull through :)

This is beautifully written. You have described the emotions the girl feels wonderfully. She suffers alone but i see some hope there when you say she knows Go hears her prayer. The ending was really good, not all things end good i guess but i liked that you kept it that way.5

This is beautifully written. You have described the emotions the girl feels wonderfully. She suffers alone but i see some hope there when you say she knows Go hears her prayer. The ending was really good, not all things end good i guess but i liked that you kept it that way.5

Wow thts amazing i can completely relate

Great poem. I have a close friend who's like the girl in this poem so I'm able to relate through her.

Wow that is excellent!! i like to write what i feel inside me. i see you do the same. i can relate

I like it sound likw me when i was in middle school i give u a 5

This is beautiful...you have talent:)

It is so emotional. I love it love it love it! I can imagine (not really imagine because i felt that way before) the hopeless feeling this poem sends out.

Basicly explains my life and my whole world really good this is its wonderful

Amazing. Putting into words what many people feel and do. You got talent. I like this poem lots. =)

Pouring your heart out through words doesn't come easy.I wish I could do it.

A powerful write and every emotion in it was heartrending.

All i can say is...wow. this is actually the first poem i have read where i didn't want it to stop! absolutely fantastic. I don't know if this is from personal experience, but if it is...hang in there and keep writing. im sure all these comments will help boost your self esteem and confidence, because you have talent girl!!

This poem was very well written, it showed you have a lot of talent. Reading it was very good and i learned a lot from reading this poem about you and your writing style :3 Tahnk yo ufro sharing it :3

Thats amazing. most young girls feel this way and it helps them to read and know there not the only one.

Now i know that am not the only lost sheep in this thing called LOVE.
though in this i could smell lust.

Incredible. these emotions depressingly showing from this pom really hits a sharp pain in my heart for you. great job expressing your feelings. 5/5