Nitin, sadness is clear in your words. Gives the reader a sense of a person fading away, losing their future and slipping to the past, then slipping away from life. It seems the person is aware of what is happening to them through their emotions but helpless to stop it. Well done.
Your poems always have so much depth and strength. Doesn't matter if it's love or sadness you put your all in every word.
I really liked this , you penned what most of us feel from time to time, part of life I guess
Excellent write, I've missed reading your work
Hmm, yes the sadness can be read all throughout this poem in your words. Your feeling are poured into each line and echoed between the lines. The had a simple structure that was easily kept and a good flow though it did seem a little messed up with the rhyming you had. I could tell in places that you were forcing the rhyme. You would shape the stanza so it would fit the rhyme but it sometimes messed up the flow or messed up the imagery.
"Drowning in tides of memories
While standing at the edge of a river
Wondering if its the water shining
Or may be my tears have turned silver"
This was a clever stanza and I liked the imagery in being drowned while you were only standing at the edge. Also the rhyming of silver and river was a bit forced but I think the stanza still carried itself. Your emotion made up for a lot in this poem. I could tell that you were writing your heart away into these lines and it is evident with each word of each stanza.
Overall, I liked the poem and I think with some more adjustments this poem could really have a strong overall foundation and stronger message. Still the poem was effective in portraying your feelings and helping you open up. I am glad to see you writing and also improving as a poet. Great job and keep writing!