Omelet?

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Jan 21, 2012


Woke up this morning with great expectations
Quickly got dressed without hesitation
Combed my hair and put on my boots
Down the hallway with a 'woot woot'
Ran to the table and when I sat down
My ear to ear smile turned into a frown
Expecting pancakes and what did I get
Whole wheat toast and a veggie omelet

*written a couple years ago hope you enjoy*

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  • 13 years ago

    by Gravity

    It made me laugh,
    hope you enjoy the omlet.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lu

    Loved this! Sure made me giggle. A little salt and pepper and a sprinkle of cheese makes it all good ... lol
    Cute read, thanks for sharing

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Haha :D this was great, delightful and funny,,you can play this out in ur mind as u read it. Fantastic job I loved it 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Veggie omelet.. hmm..

    As long as it has melted cheese.. then I guess its all right.

    haha.. its a nice piece. I already finished having my dinner but now it made me think about breakfast.. so pancakes for tomorrow. :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    This is what happens when someone else is in control of your breakfast. ;-)

    Seriously, the worst part was that it was 'veggie.'

    Good write, but may I suggest you look again at the fourth line? The rhythm might work better like this: "ran down the hall with ..." Of course that puts ran in two lines, so that particular word may not work.

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