Fundamental Love

I thought this was a beautiful love piece,
The ending left me in wow

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow.

--it sounds refreshing and cool to me also calm. The details of holding hands and the images that it creates. I thought that was really well written.

Amazing, beautiful, wondrous. Just, wow. What a lucky lady to have recieved such a poem in her honor. :)

"Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure."

I loved this had to be my favorite stanza. Because it is how I feel about someone.

"Her loves a fundamental,
Amazing and allure.
The prime of all essential gifts,
a radical and pure.

She's the base of my foundation,
the rock where I adhere.
She makes every fear I have in life,
completely disappear."
Aw this is so cute, I can tell you really adore this girl:)

"Her love, it can't be broken down,
it exists in purest form.
With all the chaos in existence,
she's the eye inside my storm."
I just love reading love poems and how people try to put love into words I love how people express this emotion and you have done a pretty dang good job!

"Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure."
This really made me smile:)

"Her loves as epic as the cosmos,
yet so intricate to me.
Through the window of my existence
she's the everything I see.

As pure as perfect snow flakes,
that loft the winter air.
She's the soft still gleam of snow kissed hills,
with no footprints anywhere."
Great imagery here amazing!

"And none hath traveled on those hills,
I'm blessed to journey through.
This promise land reserved for me,
that's beautiful and new.

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow."
The ending was just beautiful, I really liked this poem!
5/5

She's the base of my foundation,
the rock where I adhere.
She makes every fear I have in life,
completely disappear.

~ This is amazing, being which the person you love can really chase all your fears away.

Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure.

~ Aww... this part is really very sweet. And I especially love the last part.

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow.

~ I squealed at this part! This is so sweet and I can feel your love for the girl echoing in every part of your poem. 5/5!

She's the base of my foundation,
the rock where I adhere.
She makes every fear I have in life,
completely disappear.

~ This is amazing, being which the person you love can really chase all your fears away.

Yes...It's even so profoundly sweet,
untamed, and hence thus pure.
my heart could shatter beyond despair,
and she could be the cure.

~ Aww... this part is really very sweet. And I especially love the last part.

And now we stand inside that door,
toward that world of white we go.
together, holding hands,

...to leave "our" footprints in the snow.

~ I squealed at this part! This is so sweet and I can feel your love for the girl echoing in every part of your poem. 5/5!