A World without you

Thx a bunch!!! really helped! :)

First, think this is a good poem that really portrays your emotions or sadness and refusal to give up on love.

I don't like the stylistic use of 'n' and 'cuz' I think it detracts from the poem.
Mainly, I'd just clean it up a bit...hopefull this doens't detract too much from the meaning and feeling of your poem

I know there is not an ending, in which we are together,
I know for us, there is no forever,
But just for a while, for just a day,
Let me pretend, you're not that far away.
I don't know why our paths met, then diverged
Every moment with you, is a moment
experienced only by the lucky few.
Life decided otherwise, but in my heart what lies,
is true.
I will fight till I have nothing left.
I close my eyes to open up a world,
Where its just you and I
A world, where there are no good-byes.
I loved you more than I knew how.
Its good that I have the pain,
for the love, your love, would make me insane.

thanks,
z

Guys, plz tell me how it is....im up for constructive criticism...