This is a great poem. For some reason, it made me remember my prom. Good memories but specially the dress. I enjoy the flow of this piece and the imagery.

DUDE, it's such a fantastic sensual poem :)

Love it.

TJ,

This piece is elegant. Wonderful tonight is one of my all time favorite songs by Clapton... This poem is gorgeous..... the soft, precious tones really makes this pretty piece.... love it!!

This so short but amazing and humourous. I love how the subject got the onlooker hynotized making him admire the beauty of this damsel as if been bewitched ;-). Very peach and soothing to the ears. You're a terrific writer, spell-binding.

This was easy to read and made me smile as I did. The image of a man with a big smile on his face as he saw the lady of his dreams came to mind and the emotion of happiness was foremost. It is so simple yet says so much about that man and his feeling. Well done.

This is a great poem:)I love how its written and its simplesty:)
5/5

This is a great poem:)I love how its written and its simplesty:)
5/5

Reading the title, the first thing that came to my mind was Wonderful tonight by Clapton. This piece is short and sensual. I really do not have words to praise this piece.

Very well written bro.

Am learning wonderful tonight on guitar, I smiled when I read the poem, well done : )

This is so romantic and a seductive image comes to my mind..like a scene from a movie! Short yet it lingers in the mind with vivid images..liked it!

This is great Tj. Loved your choice of words. I found it to have some humour though. Wonderfully written.

My King,

Your piece is stunning. I always love what you write.

Language is impossibly strong! I felt this poem, ridiculously professional.

I love it love it love it !!!

You penned a spectacular piece, I just couldnt help but to smile as I went through it. This is the time of poems I personaly love reading.

Awesome job :)

TJ your poem is very sensual and sexy

Brilliant!

x

Wow this is wonderful and a great write,,a very delightful piece with great imagery,,I loved it fantastic job 5/5

Very pleasing to read, fresh ,new , I'm loving it . nice vibe, keep writing .

Wow! TJ, this poem took my breath away... it was phenomenal...

It was simple yet so effective and the scene you expressed was really lovely and easy to imagine. I really like your choice of words, they fit perfectly with this poem.

Beautiful poem!! =D