Pointless life

by Ole Carsten   Feb 6, 2012


Sometimes my name has no point
like I don't belong
neither in heaven nor on earth
I can't see myself shining
life is a heavy coat, tears in all pockets
I want to be one of millions vanished

stop all time, wait for seconds
In a million years
Let all wait for something
I wait for a smile
And grow old without a single one
I want to be one of faceless ones

Stop traffic, let them wait and weep
Endless time is waiting all

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Thanks
    I am listning to all advice and correct mistakes
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Ole :)
    Very nice poem, indeed.

    Here is a suggestion:
    the first 'nor' should be 'neither'.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Please help with the language I you want, that could be fun

  • 12 years ago

    by Kiko

    You are a wonderful poet, Ole.
    Even though there is a bit of a language barrier, your feelings really shine through.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for comments
    sometimes I seek back to a mood in my soul, this a moment of fatigue, when I am really tired I think in blue moods.

    oh I even made a mistake

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