This piece is beautiful~ I love this form, and the word usage just brought me to the freshness of springtime.... I especially adore the last line.... very cute and fun~ very nice piece

Another form completed and brilliant.
Wonderful images and refreshing read. As always great write Raj

What a delight, such images. A giggling spring, spirited colors waddling being just a couple of them. You have given a voice to a season, autumn and how SHE must feel knowing that her time is almost over. Nice work with the form and this was a joy to read.

I thought I was good at nature poems till I read this! I loved the form and I really love the many vivid images that just dance across your lines. You kept to the form and did a wonderful job doing so. Your talent in nature poems is amazing and I would love to read more of these type of poems by you. I really don't have much to say as this piece really blew me away. Great job and keep writing!

A little heart warming write of nature :)

while a silent autumn

^I like this line..a silent autumn..it is when you think about it for nothing much happens.

waits in denial to
watch spirited colors

^Spirited colors..as I read this I could see how flowers spring up one fine day..love the wordings :)

welcoming giggling spring.

^Another line that makes the reader smile! One can imagine how delightful spring can be and it truly makes the heart smile..loved the write and the form used! Well done!

Raj,
What a delightful poem, I am not much one for forms but I think this form was on the main boards as a contest or something. This would have fit in nicely among them. You have a knack for this type of poetry and getting the reader to connect with your poetry. Wonderful, thanks for the share.

You mastered the form beautifully .........very soothing

Wow, this is so beautiful. It's hard to do a form such as this and still capture the essence of your topic, but you seemed to do this so effortlessly. I adored the imagery, it made me feel there, in the moment. There is that winter waiting period from death to rebirth, and you captured it perfectly. Beautifully executed!

This form sounds so tough but then reading the flow, it seems so easy. The fact is that you made it look so simple. You simply amazes me with your choice of words. Great write.

Loved this ending:

welcoming giggling spring

all the best and take care

Definitely a creative form of poetry to describe nature and its beauty. In particular I like how you used sounds of nature as adjectives and verbs to make it all come alive, poetically for the reader.