Darkness inside my heart

by Dark   Mar 9, 2012


You who fear the darkness inside my heart
shall feel the most viscous wrath
you will feel the pain the agony of death
it will never end until your dead

my heart is filled with hatred
that i know you cannot bear
so run as fast as you can
or you will hear the requiem, sound of death ..

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  • 13 years ago

    by Dark

    Thx glad you like it :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Shadow

    Dark and Great, nice going.
    -Shadow

  • 13 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I read it and only when reading it again did I notice a few errors. Powerful poem.

    "shall feel the most viscous wrath"
    ->should be vicious

    "it will never end until your dead"
    -> should be you're

    But all in all, a very captivating poem.
    5/5 from me :)

    -X

  • 13 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Very sad:(Nice lines!

  • 13 years ago

    by SkYler BabIe for EvEr andAlways

    Wow speachless

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