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by Stephen Mar 20, 2012 category : Love, romance / lost love
I'm sorry for... Silence on roads trips It's not my desire Causing hardships For you, I should admire I'm sorry for... For snapping at you Causing unnecessary pain Because of a rescue It's no longer a complaint I'm sorry for... Lack of emotional support You need this fulfillment I know now I will not fall short Only you can make that judgment I'm sorry for... Not living in the present Focusing on the future You must have felt so distant It's no longer a hinder I'm sorry for... The negative attitude You didn't deserve It has been subdued Positive you will observe I'm sorry for... Not being perfect Improvement you will see Hoping for a pleasing verdict For you and me I'm sorry for... If I left something out Remembering the above You use to point out I have nothing but love
by Xanthe
It does hurt to hurt someone we love. Just something I noticed... "It's no longer a complain" You should change complain to "complaint" Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this. Anyone asking forgiveness will be forgiven... Great job and keep writing :) 5/5 -X