She lies but dosent
by Michael Mar 21, 2012
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I've always done what be asked of me to win her but she does not want me the way I want her she had me crawl to her knees to be kicked away let in the cold to freeze away why does she do this to toy with the emotions of a man in love or like I cant tell I'm frozen in this death |
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12 years ago
It's nice of the imagery and the emotions but u could use alittle of both in my oppinion elaborate the misery mold it into a story of how it just kills you that she denies ur love but all in all nice poem! :)
