This is my favorite by you so far- I loved it! Remember me for me, the message was great and true. Sometimes we forget we have beauty inside of us, the beauty on the outside won't last forever....

great inspiration!

There's nothing more one could have ever asked for in Life, beyond this.. Good rhyme skills..

What a lot of people strive to have (beauty, money..) won't really matter in the end. I like how you penned this.

"People living theirs day by day,
it's not like anyone makes it out alive anyway."
Sort of sarcastic, but my favorite lines anyway :)

It was a great read 5/5 Keep writing!

-X

I love this poem... not many people see that life is extremly short so why be someone else or be fighting for something and end up in jail or prison for it because of silly stupid decesions.. be true to yourself is the message i got from this and to live life to the fullest, i absolutely love this poem. it is written very well. 5/5

Perfect

Living each day as it comes, that's the best we can do. Great Poem