My Final Goodbye.

by Girl of Conviction   Apr 3, 2012


This is my final goodbye,
don't attempt to stop me don't even try.
You see i've put up with pain for far too long,
im weak and im tired from trying to be strong.
They laugh at me not knowing how much it hurts,
well this is for them (cuts wrist), as i watch, the blood squirts.
My family says ill never be good enough,
i guess they're right, but they've never had it rough.
This is for them too (cuts deeper) more blood rushing out,
can they hear my silent screams? Can they hear me shout?
I feel dizzy, there's not much time,
let me finish my final rhyme.
Dont cry for me once im gone,
i dont know why you waited to care this long.
Goodbye world, goodbye to the hurt,
goodbye to the people who made me feel like dirt.
This is my final goodbye,
dont attempt to stop me dont even try.

[just writing from a point of view not really going to hurt myself :) ]

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  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    A lot of people can relate to this poem.

    I loved it. Writing about how badly some families hurt people, making them grab the razor and slitting their wrists. You can feel the emotion as you read it. and visualize what is going on in your head.

    great job :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I really really love this poem. Its full of emotion, and i loved how you told a story! 5/5 <3 Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Darling I hope this anit true(:

    Beatiful poem Hun
    5/5 from me x

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was a powerfully spoken poem. And i of course read this isn't how you really feel. Some people don't realize that people do care about them. They basically put up a barrier to thoughts ,actions, and feelings. Their lost in their own world which in itself is a battle within. But that's when they need to open their eyes. People do care and they want to see people prosper. Granted most people these days don't have any affection. But even if it's just one person. Well that should count for something. All in all a nice write. :)

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