Emptiness

by Rowena Culaste   Apr 4, 2012


I can't forget the time we've been together,
the happiness that turns our heart into gladness,
the times that no one owns the world but only you and me.
but this time i felt that the world fall's down on me.

i'm longing for your love and care,
i keep my self busy but suddenly you get into my mind.
i think i can't do this if without you,
because only you can fell the emptiness of my heart.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Excellent! love this poem...mind to get"if" in this line?:-- i think i can't do this if without you..." rough the flow...much better I think I can't do this without you..

    over all it's an amazing piece..so lovely=)5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rowena Culaste

    Thank you for appreciating my work. and i'm just hoping that i can learn more from this site. this site provide me a good stepping stone to become a good writer someday...

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Well written. Memories still remain in the head no matter how or when you left each other.

    We tend to pre occupy ourselves with other things but if what you fell in your heart is real, it will still come back to you. Great write.

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