This is to the best girl in my life

This piece is amazing and it seems like it would make any girl thrilled.

Okay, so I owe you a real comment about your poem. Here we go:

Getting to know you again,
It's tough at first,
So much has changed,
Some good some bad.

^^ I love that it is directed to this girl and that you start by saying this is rekindled friendship, this gives a hint how this piece will go.

The good things are happy,
The bad things make me worry,
I want you to be safe,
I want you to be happy.

^^ "Good" has already been used and might be able to be stronger, as could "bad." As for happy, the last time its used in this stanza, it could also be stronger. I mean we just read about happy why not ecstatic or another synonym?

Learning of bad news,
It struck me hard,
I know its worse for you,
But I'll still worry.

More with the word bad!!! However, I like the point of it being worse for her and yet you care. The point that you worry is also nice cause it shows her that she means something to you, even if only for the moment.

I'm suprised by how much I've missed,
Whishing well know each other more than last,
Wanting us to last longer this time,
Hoping nothing will break us apart.

^^ "Whishing" should be wishing, I believe. This stanza has the most of yourself I think. It has the most of your voice and it makes a statement to everyone about you and this "lover"

Finally together again,
A huge difference in my life,
I'm better than ever,
You make me a better person.

^^ This stanza is short and sweet thats all I'm gonna say here.

You are the best person in my life,
You help me make better choices,
Without you I might be dead by now,
Your lovely idiot is here to stay.

^^ Beautiful ending. I especially love the personal touch about the lovely idiot. I'm sure she'll like that.

In fact, I think its funny, my very first poem on this site was called Lovely Idiot, its still up if you search it. As I said before some places could be stronger. I liked the use of adding your own voice and directing the piece directly to your love. All in all Its a great piece.

4/5 but I'll keep reading your work, in hopes to see you become someone big.

~MRK

This piece is amazing. Real lucky girl. I love the flow and the word choice is okay, bit could be stronger. The style is great and I love how clear your voice is.