I have to say David I was in awe reading this one!
I love the words and images you have used here, they are beautiful and magical I felt a sense of peace while reading this one. I think it's because I loveeeeeeeeeee the moon itself. It is gorgeous when it is a clear sky and all you see is the moon and stars surrounding it. I also love looking at the water when there is a moon just over it and you can see the water clearly. It reminds me of my holiday house in Wollongong where I have seen the moon do that a few times and I always end up speechless.
A gorgeous write David,
Beautifully written, I felt as if you were painting a picture as I read. (:
9 years ago
"Have you ever wondered
what will happen
If the sun had no moon
for it to chase each day
Our night skies will be
for the star light
is no surrogate for a
But "Moonflower!?!" Never heard of this but as the poem flows it really has a great impact on the poem.
May be, this is how rare or unique your love is!?
I definitely like the poem as a whole!
If possible, 10/5! Haha...