Nature's Final Lullaby

Im not much of a critic but I have to just say that I love this piece, drew me in straight away and i love the flow of it..for what it's worth I'd give it 5/5 all day long :-) x

The tone of sadness is so present that it's hard to not awknowdlege it. I found every stanza well written and this is different. I like the flow and for some reason this piece sounded more like a vent to me.
I hope everything is good.

Absolutely beautyful

Oh this poem is beautiful!

You won't believe me but I wrote a Haiku yesterday and called it nature's lullaby lol The title drew me in instantly and it kinda freaked me out at the same time lol

The rhyming in this is beautiful, and it just flows so well. I wanted to read it over again so I did. I love the words you've used and the images are just gorgeous!!!

x

The minimal punctuation here could have caused the flow to waver but in contrast the flow was near enough flawless.

The title caught my eye, and I immediately sensed that the piece was a saddened piece of nature, I loved the wording and the sensuality of the piece, that made me feel as though I was in the poem itself.

Fantastic!! Bravo

loved it....

xxxx