Suicide in Pen

by Emily   Apr 17, 2012


It felt like my life was falling apart,
My dad was breaking my mom's fragile heart,
It seemed like my friends all hated me,
So I put myself out of my misery,
I lied in a ditch and stared at the sky,
Slit my wrists and didn't cry,
It wasn't like anybody would miss me,
I was dead would forever be,
My true love said to me, "Please come back!",
But it was too late the world faded black,
You all hate me now you all hated me then,
That's why I wrote "The End" in pen,
I'm grateful for my sacrifice,
And my pale, white skin as cold as ice,
It felt like my life was falling apart,
I like it up here won't go back to restart.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Emily

    Thanks....im too afraid too...its not gonna happen....i just write all of this to get it all out...its
    just seeming like god isnt there....like he isnt even listenening....im so lost and alone and i feel like i dont belong anywhere....any advice?????? Help!!!!!!!!!! I dont know how much more i can take!

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Suicide never solves anything.. No matter how messed up you think your life is, never turn to suicide or self-harm. It does nothing but worsen the problem. If this is a vent, it's good to let all those pain out, but don't turn to the knife, turn to God instead..
    Keep your head high and keep writing.
    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Dont kill yourself......i mean what if you go to hell? im here if you need to talk to someone

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