A Broken Reflection

by Selfrejected   Apr 28, 2012


Darkness rises; I try to escape
All my sin is turned into pain
What have I done to ravage myself so?
All those times I thought I steered true
Found the lines and raced right on through

Aches and regrets, haunt me so
It's a nasty habit to be young and feel so old
Need away to just break this mold
Silent whispers blow right on through
Voices I wish I listened to

Cause it never was bad, it was always good
Until echos find their way back to this room
All those things I did to you
This broken reflection I bid myself to

Darkness rises; I try to escape
I'm sorry for the future you're left too

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  • 13 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Waw waw waw !!!oh man I loved it

    really welldone keep it up 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Written well. The rhythm, the flow and the rhyme are fitted to each other...i like the imagery,too..meaningful and the scheme is clear..--"It's a nasty habit to be young and feel so old"--very brilliant imagery...

    --Cause it never was bad, it was always good
    Until echos find their way back to this room
    All those things I did to you
    This broken reflection I bid myself to
    >>best stanza in your poem..and the ending is good..whole piece is well-penned--
    5/5
    - :=)

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