Inspiration (My 1st Nonet)

Wow, good job, you done a great first attempt.

I'm in agreement with Xanthe.
The emotion in this one is strong and amazing.
You are truly a great writer!
5/5

"And torturous enemies deceive."
---This is the third line, so it must have a syllable count of seven. I suggest you remove 'and' most of the time, it only weakens a poem when not used properly. And you need to eradicate one more syllable, perhaps a different synonym for deceive?
"Over Powering my mind,"
---overpowering is one word.
"With negative thoughts.
With knives cutting"
---I like this, but the repetition of 'with' puts it off.
"My wrist bleed
Scarlet
Flows"
---'bleed' and 'flow' kind of gives the same image. Bleed flows and flows bleed. Perhaps change the picture a bit.
Overall, for your first nonet, it's well-written. I like this. Keep it up :)
-X

Very good. I can feel the emotion pour out of this. It's simple and short yet powerful for those who understand your pain. Good work.
5/5
~Kitty

Nice it's very filled with imagery grl! :) and i love it im a cutter so yeah lol but either way very good