Soul Respit

by Richie   May 3, 2012


I'm drowning my sorrows from the years
As they encompass all my fears,
I can't escape this place I'm in
O please come help I cannot win

The Snakes of Betrayal
Burn on my skin
And revenge by fire
O pleas come, help it's all it desires

I'm trapped in my soul
And it's out of control
It wants to destroy me
O please come help, I cannot be free

I yearn for the light
I pray for respite
But my soul has thrown me deep within
O please come help, where do I begin

I can't escape this place I'm in
My soul destroyed me, I cannot win.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    The emotion is very powerful, the flows goes on and fitted in the lines..but try, to check in the 4th stanza, i think it's-- where from ware?just try to check, but over all I enjoy reading this.amazing
    5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Richie

      Just fixed it, sorry not the best speller.:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Loved the expression of the poem. It is one of the nicest emotions of all the poems I've read.
    I think it is very good! 4/5

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